Friday, January 25, 2008

Acts of Love

Acts of Love
by Pam Rehm

If endear is earned
and is meant to identify
two halves

then it composes
one meaning

which means
a token

a knot
a note

a noting in the head
of how it feels

to have your heart
be the dear one

Pam Rehm, “Acts of Love” from Small Works. Copyright © 2005 by Pam Rehm. Reprinted with the permission of Flood Editions.
Source: Small Works (Flood Editions, 2005).

why this poetry:
I read this poetry in when I was young. I choose this poetry because is nostalgic.

analysis:
1st stanza: if you being loved, or love someone, it is time to find partner.
2nd~4th stanza:it means token, knot, and note. I think in this part author made rhyme and made word out of token. Word knot and note rhyme, sounds same. Also, their also can made up with token. In verbal meaning, token is mark, which in poet, it means mark of love, and knot means bond between couples. Note means mark as token.
5th stanza: first word rhymes with note, and it means don't think about it,
6th stanza: just feel the heart and follow it.

JK♪: hmm....hard...deep meaning inside? I think it's just saying of love that covered with hard words.